The main issue with this is the audio balance. Once the music comes in at 1:17, the sound effects and narration are almost inaudible. The music has a lot of loud low end, which drowns out everything else. It’s also a little repetitive, so the overall sound coming from the game sounds chaotic.
The melody that comes in 2:08 takes over, and makes the rest of the game even more hard to hear.
At 2:20, the music ends quite abruptly when you go to the next area. It’s lucky it ended at the end of a measure, but it still sounds too extreme.